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The Nameless Lancer

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  • I live in Wherever I May Roam
  • I was born on May 8
  • My occupation is an American Badass
  • I am Madly in Anger With the World
  • The Nameless Lancer

    Guys, I’m so sorry for the long delay on this. I’ve already informed everyone on what happened, so I don’t need to go over that here. I’m going to try my very best to make this chapter as worth the wait as I can. This chapter is called Damaged Justice. It’s chapter eleven in Wrath of the Bloody Crow.


    Maria and I arrived at Antal’s house. It took us a little over an hour to get there. Antal was probably asleep, since there was no light coming from his bedroom window. It was nighttime, and the dark hid us all too well. We moved closer to the door, and hid on both sides. I could hear Morrak and Ronan having a conversation inside, but I couldn’t quite make out what they were saying. I did hear Ronan say that he was leaving, but Morrak was staying…


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    Blackened is the tenth chapter of my twentieth fanfiction, “Wrath of the Bloody Crow”. Sorry about the last chapter being too short, but I really had to write it in a hurry. This chapter is going to be so much better. So far, I’m loving this story, so I want it to continue to kick ass. I hope you like this chapter.


    Getting up to leave the workshop was surprisingly difficult due to the position I was in. I didn’t want to wake Maria up, which wasn’t easy when she was leaning on me all night. I propped up my legs, stood up a little bit, looked at Gehrman, and mouthed the words “help me”. He stood up, and lifted Maria’s head gently off my shoulder, which allowed me to stand up without waking her up. He straightened her up, and backed away. Befor…


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    Sometimes, when writing a fanfiction, I have too many ideas, and have to cut some stuff. Other times, I completely forget to include something, and go back and add it later on, but I haven’t done that every time. Sometimes I’ve even cut stuff that people would have complained about. I want to go over all of the stuff that I consider cut content. There’s quite a good bit.


    • Through the Bars - In chapter 11, “The Great Escape”, Harold needs to create a disturbance in order to get a guard to come over to his cell so that he can escape. In the finished product, he yells very obnoxiously. I thought about making it to where Pale’s character was in the cell next to him, and he randomly starts humping the back of her neck when she has her back to him…

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    Warning: When talking about chapter 3, I say somethings that might be controversial. Just remember that I’m speaking my own honest opinion, so please don’t take anything I say personally.

    Plague’s latest story, “The Hunt Returns”, is an extremely weak fanfiction. It’s his weakest story since “Shadow Over Yharnam Part 2”, and we can all agree that it doesn’t come close to deserving a performance score. The story just does too many things wrong, and not enough right. I can describe this story with a sentence: “Wait, what?”. This story has many parts that just come out of nowhere with absolutely no explanation whatsoever. I’d love to know what the fucking point is, but I can’t. Trying to find the answers to the questions that I have is like tr…

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    Atlas, Rise! is the ninth chapter of my twentieth fanfiction, "Wrath of the Bloody Crow". This chapter is alright. I hope you like it. This is the shortest chapter in this story, even more than "All Nightmare Long". I had to write this in a hurry, because I had turn to my laptop in today. I was listening to the Metallica song Atlas, Rise! when I was writing this.


    Gehrman returned to Zilpha's house. Maria stayed at the workshop, and I stayed with her. Gehrman told me to stay with her no matter what, and I did exactly that. I wasn't going to let her be alone after what she just went through. I was never more than 5 feet away from her. The only times that I took my eyes off of her were when she had to go to the bathroom (I would have liked to,…


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