You Should Have Killed Me When You Had the Chance is the seventh and penultimate chapter of my eighth fanfiction, "Immortalized". I was having trouble thinking of a good name that fits with the chapter, so I went with this. I hope you like this chapter. 

You Should Have Killed Me When You Had the Chance 

Henriett, Viktor, and I went to Maltron's hideout. He had his minions summoned, so he wasn't there. Remaining undetected was surprisingly easy. The three of us made it to Maltron's house, and waited for him to return. 

About 20 minutes later, Maltron returned. He entered his house, and we came out of hiding. He looked around at us all. I had my Rifle Spear aimed at him, Henriett had her Bowblade transformed, and Viktor had his Chikage and Repeating Pistol ready. 

Maltron: Why didn't I expect this? 

Harold: Because you are a moron. This time you will die. 

Maltron: Still thinking you can kill me, Harold? 

Harold: You should have killed me when you had the chance, and before I found out your weakness. 

Maltron: Fuck. 

Harold: Time to die. 

We started fighting. Maltron did surprsingly well against the three of us. He teleported around alot in order to get an advantage, but he never could get an advantage. He teleported out of his house, and we followed him. 

Maltron: You're better than I thought. Time to even the numbers. 

Maltron threw one of his blades at Viktor's throat, killing him. 

Maltron: Join your sister. The other 2 will be with you shortly. 

Henriett shot Maltron in the chest, causing him to bleed. He started laughing, and readied a spell. 

Maltron: Playtime is over! 

He cast a spell on Viktor's dead body, bringing him back as a mind slave. 

Maltron: Kill them both. 

Viktor: Yes, master. 


That concludes chapter 7. Tell me what you think in the comments. Chapter 8 will be out later. 


  • Maltron's line "Playtime is over" is the same line that Raiden says when using his Level 3 Super in Playstation All Stars Battle Royale. 

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